Open Poetry #13 |
Unadorned Trees |
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
resonant cobalt through unpretentious branches of ardor seep into my eyes, adding to the memory of sunup, now hours behind us... visions of green beneath our dream-filled heads exemplify the sparkle in the animated imagination, just within our reach... subtle sights of marigold surrounding our joined hands illuminate the spirit revealed in the fluency of our dialogue, encasing us in this promise made in the presence of unborn stars... enigmatic journey of butterflies across our unobstructed view rejuvenate the love we have found in this gift of time, surrounding us like the violet grace of wildflowers... incomparable rays of sunlight, melting any remaining silences, bring an unspeakable warmth to the words now spoken, reinforcing the significance of the encompassing air above... expectant lyrics carving our joined names in the sky eliminate the doubt of our formerly indefinite fate, giving to me the peace which eluded my grasp for so long... -kh 05/14/01 to be with you... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Heard and understood. So beautfully stated,All that is missing is Ms. Lavender. Love it/ya. From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
exemplify the sparkle in the animated imagination, just within our reach... =========================== illuminate the spirit revealed in the fluency of our dialogue, encasing us in this promise made in the presence of unborn stars... enigmatic journey of butterflies across our unobstructed view ========================= incomparable rays of sunlight, melting any remaining silences, bring an unspeakable warmth to the words now spoken, reinforcing the significance of the encompassing air above... expectant lyrics carving our joined names in the sky ===================== what a very cool pic... and what a VERY COOL poem, talk about imagery and verbiage overload!! you sated the reader of both in this girl there are so many cool and unique lines and phrases in this... I feel like I been dipped in a dictionary and then rolled in Eden. Like a scene in that movie "What Dreams May Come" where they are transported into a Monet like painting of color. very well done poetess snowdockers *L* (rhyme? we dont need no stinkin rhyme) (and I'll deny saying that) LOL tis never easy being a moth, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to put this gem in me library... and teach who was just read this has something to say... Dear Snorepants...just how many languages do you expect this cowboy to learn. Here I am trying to learn Cherokee and now you want me to try and learn English too? In all seriousness, this is a remarkable unification of wisdom, insight and growth, all patched together in a quilt of nature's beauty and penned with a very powerful use of vocabulary. I am so impressed that we wont even mention the first place and the last place teams on the diamond!!!! I made JM read this to me twice so that I could fully inhale the essence of this superb free verse. Teach gives ya an A++ take care Powderpanties. ========================== (he forgot about the rhyme) hehehehe we got the puter power!!!! even if he did do the baseball BLAH BLAH tis never easy being a moth, |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
lp: thank you! I am glad you liked it! JM: nope...don't need rhyme...hehe...fantastic reply, though...thanks so much! you always have the best compliments!! JM/Teach: snorepants??? um...sherr...whatEVER! seriously, thank you, m'friend for your reply...tell ya what...I'll teach you English if you teach me Cherokee... ooooh...hehe..as for the baseball comment...ANYway...you talk in SUCH circles...talk to ya later, m'friend, and hurry back, ya hear?? sp to be with you... |
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