Open Poetry #13 |
In Your Dreams |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Go to sleep, baby I will be there in your dreams To hold you through the dark hours Safe in loves warm bed. Go to sleep, baby The miles between us disappear When you close your eyes And draw me near. Go to sleep, baby Let me come on a whispered prayer To share your nights dreaming In feathered softness. Go to sleep, baby While the nights still new And we have hours to be together 'Til the sun rises. Then carry my dream Throughout the suns shining Until theres no need To go to sleep, baby. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Paula, this is beautiful! Truly it is! Sauni Sauni :) |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
You penned well - make sure to get the teddy bear. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Grovy poem, I know that feeling, when you care for someone so much that everything else becomes imaterial . I thought it was very sweet . One of those poems you could just role up in bed with and let sleep not matter !!! Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Try not, do or do not, there is no try . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula you're showing a lot of caring here...James |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I love this Paula. Shows a lot of love hidden away in you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very delicate longing written here, Paula...though I'm afraid you wouldn't want to be in MY dreams! seems like your muse has found you again, just lovely, dearheart! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
really cool write Paula |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Caring and passion all rolled up into a very fine write. Excellent. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Wow, what great love speaks from these words. Titia |
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