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The essense of imagination
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The essense of imagination |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The essence of imagination. . . slowly took over not slithering like a snake, but still, that wormlike feeling of being invaded by a power greater not of a lightning bolt, nor like a flash but a slow, insidious movement looking for some fertile spot in which to curl, or perhaps it was more like a whirligig of a seed being thrown by the winds of time onto that same spot of fertile burrowing in, nature’s own movement to promote life if not love corporeal thoughts, indeed, ready to establish a root, lacking water, still insistent, as life is, to begin a tear drop is sometimes all that is required to feed life to a seed in need imagination’s tears begin to shed light by its pure essence slowly the seed pushes down the root, while tendrils curl upward toward light slowly the imagination of essence was fulfilled by that invasion of life uncurled and unfurled, a moment of beauty born from the essence of imagination…. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional! Regards, Sudhir |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
OUTSTANDING! I really enjoyed reading this....well done! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but I love a metaphor being squeezed for all it is worth, and you used them beautifully in this piece, exceptional is right, great writing Decaflame! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sudhir, I've read your works. An exceptional from you is humbling. Thank you... INclan, thank you so very much for this... Mysteria, squeezed like good lemonade, indeed, thank you for reading.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is outstanding. . . very well done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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