Open Poetry #13 |
Dreamers |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~*~ Dreamers ~*~. . art: Jim Warren "Island Dream" ~ www.jimwarren.com ~ ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
What a very nice piece excellent message good flow and the multi-media works quite well. This is very very nice, and your wisdom learned shines through.' My compliments "The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It's not wise to be a fool too long, Too long in dreaming still, It's hard to face reality, Heart fights against brain's will." I really enjoyed your sentiments in this thought-provoking piece Mysteria! I love to ponder the depths of reality verses dreams ... you've penned these thoughts beautifully, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
OMG, Sharon...you have me wiping tears already this morning...what a beautiful poem..... "At last you hold a looking glass, To feeble your ways of old, But the crumpling child inside you, Wishes you had never told. How soon this life breaks dreamers, And how foolish can they be, To let sorrow their companion stay, Life's hard on dreamers such as me!" WOWZERS.....How realistic is this???????????? Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, MY LADY!!!!!!!! Luv ya muches, dawn |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
There is a lot of wisdom in these words, and I should ponder on them awhile... well done, Mysteria... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Atelamon: I am so glad you liked it - I was going to bed, and went to look at Jim Warren's art, and poof - that darn ole muse did her thing! Kit: Thank you - I have done a look of living, made a lot of mistakes, and looked in that glass more times than I care to tell you, so I better be getting smarter soon! I am so flattered you came to read my work, thank you again. Martha: Glad you liked it, see above comment re the wisdom of a fool who did dream one too many times. Decaflame: What is that saying, "Too late schmart??? Somewhere between dreams and reality a lot of happiness gets lost. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How soon this life breaks dreamers, And how foolish can they be, To let sorrow their companion stay, Not much I can add to that but AMEN... from one who now deals with nightmares! *S* This is beautiful, Mysteria... sad but soothing. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Mysteria, Life places obstacles in our paths, but it doesn't break dreamers. That is something we do to ourselves. I hope that you'll continue to pursue your dreams and believe that you can surmount those obstacles, my friend. I much enjoyed this fine piece. Michael Proust- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a finely written work... Thanks for sharing... regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Soon smiling through tormented tears, And understanding feign, Your arms still in devotion fold, To stifle out your pain. At last you hold a looking glass, To feeble your ways of old, But the crumpling child inside you, Wishes you had never told. How soon this life breaks dreamers, And how foolish can they be, To let sorrow their companion stay, Life's hard on dreamers such as me! ====================== Mysteria this is an emotinally charged piece here... emotions wrapped in rhyme and cadence done divine and as always your presentation of picture and melody add to the poetrys pleasures. very well done poetess tis never easy being a moth, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
suthern: know what cures the nightmares? A new dream - go for it girl! Auguste: Just a poem, my muse working overtime, I always dream! Sudhir: I wish to thank you for your lovely comment. Janet Marie: You are just too sweet did you know that? Thank you for "dissecting my piece" you are a wonderfully gifted poet yourself. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The poem and the thought is just flat out beautiful. Now on to the picture: I knew that blonds had more fun! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks Mabe - was for Dawn! I think she liked it don't you? Hey...blonde's do have more fun told you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ The presentation is wonderfully done. Ahhhh ! Realistically speaking ... a dreamer I will always be ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge: Me too...forever the dreamer! Thanks for your fingerprint in my sandbox! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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