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| Open Poetry #13 |
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She's Gone................ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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With a sassy sway from her hips she walked away with a smile on her lips She didn't need to look back to know you were staring after watching her, your jaw slack not believing her quiet laughter One of soft heart, so gentle and kind wasn't one you could decieve so she left you behind yet you just can't believe Not one glance back over her shoulder shows that you lack what it took to hold her ~SEA~ * just messin around...no personal meaning here.....  [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sea, this is a great "messin around" liked the last stanza Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I REALLY like this ! Sassy n' cute ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
pretty good one there sea! aint it fun to just "mess around" sometimes....*snicker* hugs, g "...if i ran away, |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome piece! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I LOVE it when you mess around...or, at least, I would  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I could see it all...and the last paragragh wrapped it together incredibly! |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Left in the dust. This is my first comment on this forum. Very enjoyable. Roger |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i found this quite emotionally real and heavy...... sometimes people know when it's time to say goodbye.... nicely done |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You may not be messing around....but you write well when you're not... excellent... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, When I came in here I expected a sad poem.. but I sheesh was I wrong! I liked this one  it made me chuckle Well written.TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Maree~ thanks this one was fun Marge~ sassy...is always good thank you Vandana~ glad you liked Dg~ yes...thanks Brad~ wow, thank you Balladeer~ yes.... you would ( lol) thanks JLR~ thank you very much Roger~ I'm so happy to be your first reply thank you Doreen~thank you for that Sunshine~ thank you RP~ glad to make you laugh...it was in fun...thank you ~SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
.........sassy. (not zesty! -Taco Bell) I see it everyday. |
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