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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Desires desires mind fires fueled by thought intense kindling caught flares ignited spark explodes combustions dark blazing passion inspires desires "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This is very effectively penned. I like the 1-2, 1-2 form ... nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Excellent...have to be careful with the fires, though! Ha! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let the blaze rise helen. . . loved this one. . . it really built up the moment. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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