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vandana
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0 posted 2001-05-14 07:51 PM



All I ask
Is love,
All I ask
To let me proove my love to you,
All I ask Is
Let me love more
that you already asked,
All I ask,
To believe In me
And believe every I say
It to you,
All I ever ask
Is to sit down
And let me give you all the
love I ever wanted
to give,
Let me show the feelngs
I have for you,
So all I ask Is for you
to just listen these words I say
It to you,
All I ask
Is give me one more chance
to proove my love to you,
All I ask
Is love from you,
All I ask
Is only you
to believe In me......

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-05-14 08:03 PM


This is so beautiful.....so real!  It puts into words all the things we ask in our hearts......vandana, this one is so fine!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Sven
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2 posted 2001-05-15 05:56 PM


and all I ask vandana, is that you never stop writing like this. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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