Open Poetry #13 |
Ring |
thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Now to put my resistance on all opposed to my existence, when hiding only brings their withdrawal; Distance to avoid a row memories insistence of a face that shone, biding a ring with an impassioned silent call. A pure metallic kiss, wanting greater than an imagined reminisce. Without any assistance a rock of solitude becomes the stance, Knowing seasons warmth falls. How to place a wedding band, on a Celtic Princess with white cheeks oh so grand. Time to learn the answer while summer becomes the dancer, along to autumn where they meet. & uncovered fingers mean seedlings defeat. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, dramatic, I had to read this a few times to get the jist of it . My small brain doesn't like such long words, whereas I do very much . I love the language you have used . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Try not, do or do not, there is no try . |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
lovely craig....plant more seedlings the ground is wonderful and so well prepared |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I see many messages in this, but throughout, I see hope... |
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