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When Suddenly
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When Suddenly |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I closed my eyes and there you were... You found me... You dried my tears and wrapped your love, around me... You saw right through my bravest smile, and held me close to you awhile... When suddenly I knew deep in my heart... That of my life you’ll always be a part... And now I know I can’t and won’t refuse you... I pray to stars above I never lose you... It seems much longer we’ve been one... In truth when all is said and done, our love is something more, than what it seems... When suddenly I wake... You’re just a dream... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh I thought you'd found the perfect one. I'm sorry it was just a dream. Good poetry. Joyce |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Ahhhhhhh, A truly passionate tale, how so often must it be but a dream though . Dreams are healthy, I hope that your nights are always filled with them . I enjoyed the poem very much, it is very well written . Thanks L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Try not, do or do not, there is no try . |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunnyone~ Love can be beautiful, even in dreams.....what a beautiful place this was to be.....  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Get a nice soft pillow, lean back and dream all you want. It is inexpensive and it such a wonderful trip. I feel like I was just on a trip with you and your dream. Keep writing! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Joyce... Oh, sometimes the dreams are worth closing your eyes for......this one was!! Thank you! Hi Tommy... Thank you, and I really am glad that you enjoyed this one, as dreams are a favorite subject for me..... Hi Lauren... Yes, I agree.......some dreams are the kind that it is hard to wake up from and leave behind. And those are the ones that linger throughout the days! Thank you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This read like a song! Kathleen Blake |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
As I read I fell into your world only to be suddenly surprised by the ending...I loved it. -------------- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kathleen... And possibly a lilting Irish melody? Thank you, my good friend!! Hi kitkat... Ah.....good.....you caught the touch of suspense at the end......thank you for appre ciating my sense of humor!!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi vandana... so great to see you again, my friend!!! And a big thank you for stopping to read!! :loveya" Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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