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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-05-14 02:30 AM




I closed my eyes and there you were...
You found me...
You dried my tears and wrapped your love,
around me...
You saw right through my bravest smile,
and held me close to you awhile...
When suddenly I knew deep in my heart...
That of my life you’ll always be a part...

And now I know I can’t and won’t refuse you...
I pray to stars above I never lose you...
It seems much longer we’ve been one...
In truth when all is said and done,
our love is something more,
than what it seems...
When suddenly I wake...
You’re just a dream...

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-14 02:32 AM


Oh I thought you'd found the perfect one.  I'm sorry it was just a dream.  Good poetry. Joyce
angelswing
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2 posted 2001-05-14 05:09 AM


Ahhhhhhh, A truly passionate tale, how so often must it be but a dream though .
Dreams are healthy, I hope that your nights are always filled with them .
I enjoyed the poem very much, it is very well written .
Thanks
L.of.L. Tommy .
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3 posted 2001-05-14 08:33 AM


Sunnyone~

Love can be beautiful, even in dreams.....what a beautiful place this was to be.....
Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Ariana
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4 posted 2001-05-14 10:05 AM


Sunny

Get a nice soft pillow, lean back and dream all you want.  It is inexpensive and it such a wonderful trip.  I feel like I was just on a trip with you and your dream.  Keep writing!

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2001-05-14 10:42 AM


Hi Joyce...
Oh, sometimes the dreams are worth closing your eyes for......this one was!!  Thank you!

Hi Tommy...
Thank you, and I really am glad that you enjoyed this one, as dreams are a favorite subject for me.....

Hi Lauren...
Yes, I agree.......some dreams are the kind that it is hard to wake up from and leave behind.  And those are the ones that linger throughout the days!   Thank you!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-05-14 10:53 AM


This read like a song!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


kitkat
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7 posted 2001-05-14 07:09 PM


As I read I fell into your world only to be suddenly surprised by the ending...I loved it.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

vandana
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8 posted 2001-05-14 07:25 PM


nice
Sunnyone
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9 posted 2001-05-14 07:29 PM


Hi Kathleen...
And possibly a lilting Irish melody?  Thank you, my good friend!!

Hi kitkat...
Ah.....good.....you caught the touch of suspense at the end......thank you for appre ciating my sense of humor!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Sunnyone
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10 posted 2001-05-14 07:32 PM


Hi vandana...
so great to see you again, my friend!!!  And a big thank you for stopping to read!!

:loveya"

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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