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with emerald green eyes. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*Gallery Reading Room* with emerald green eyes, she looked into my soul a soul that had long given up on love a soul that had decided that love would never come with emerald green eyes, she looked into my heart a heart that had been bruised and hurt a heart that had been hidden behind walls of fear with emerald green eyes, she looked into my eyes eyes that had known the tears of loss eyes that had never thought they would see again with emerald green eyes she looked into my soul my heart my eyes and in her eyes I saw the love that she had for me a love that I've always wanted to see in emerald green eyes Image: Henri Matisse The Girl with Green Eyes 1908--oil on canvas ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Back in love...what a wonderful place to be. And no one is more deserving! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is one of your loveliests poems ever, right into my treasure box it goes....  Lauren~ Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a most excellent rendition...well done Sven... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautifully written, Sven, definitely sounds like love... ~Tier |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful work, Sir Sven... Regards, my friend, Sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven this is top gun...and such a nice subject...James |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Perfect verse of love and devotion, beautifully writ. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
At least this one will not break your heart. Now all the ladies with emerald green eyes will think you wrote this just for them. You have done a lovely job. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
OH SO BEAUTIFUL.....Very touching!! Lucky gal:: LITL, †Heather†Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A work of art, my friend. Corinne |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
*Wonderful* You love beautifully, Sven!
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JLR, thank you so much. . . Lauren, thank you. . . I'm honored. . .  Sunshine, thank you my friend. . . Tier, it could only be. . . thank you. . . Sudhir, thank you for reading my friend. . . James, there's something to be said for having a good subject. . . thank you. . . Olias, thank you for reading. . . and for your words. . . inot2B, perhaps they will. . . oh well. . .  . . . thank you so much my friend. . . Heather! Welcome back. . . thank you for stopping by. . .  Corinne, thank you. . .  Just a Woman, thank you my friend. . . and, is there any other way?? ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh......beautiful Sven, and now to tuck it into my box of memories.....thank you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven...you make me repent of the not infrequent harshness of my poems. Well done. Bob |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
A beautiful painting and a poem to match. Wish I had green eyes. For those who believed in me - |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Green eyes are indeed a wading pool of delight. Well done, Sir! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i cant believe i missed this..sorry sven..i thought this shown how of a great writer you are(as i always have noticed..) and it painted a beautiful picture in my mind..thanks if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GS, thank you. . . I'm honored. . . Bob, no need to repent my friend. . . just enjoy. . . thank you. . . LP, I wish that I had green eyes too. . . Thank you. . . Lady, I have come to notice that they are. . . some of my best friends have green eyes. . . thank you. . . albert, thank you my friend. . . I am humbled by your words. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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