Open Poetry #13 |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Frightened you, have I? painting exotic coa-coa colors spread upon naked landscapes unnerving, isn't it? being carried around bends & curves through dark forrests over mountainous regions to smooth java column roads, parched yearning for thirst's quenching Rest beneath silken shade, sip peachy mango palate contemplating self reflected in twin pools shimmering with hypnotic stars hopelessly lost in java dreams, but you no longer care... ~Tier{R.T.} [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
such an eastern, mystic feeling....wrapped up well in your thoughts.... |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
This is outstanding. The voice through this is captivating. Well done! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Decaflame & Tessa for such wonderful comments. Nicely said! *smiles* ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one Tier. . . very flavorful. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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