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Dusk's Denial
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Dusk's Denial |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 blindly staring out my window at the effects of the sunset, I resign myself to the notion that it’s not really happening... all is but a long twisting approach whose end I do not follow simply because there isn’t a decent view of the splendor from here... with each day without you near verifying futility, I’ve prepared myself for yet another black and white tomorrow... living so far from the peak of auburn’s promise, I can’t continue with these advances restricted by monotony... beloved keeper of my heart’s wilting resolve, do not let go of the courage I have long let creep away... please keep up the battle for my claim to gratification until I’m through shivering from my passing on the climax of day’s end... -kh 05/13/01 to be with you... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very good, and very stark...I like the black and white of the entire write... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is very good... very cool! I loved the title.  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You've written words that speak directly to the heart... A very good read! ~Tier |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Snowpants~~I attach my tread to the poets above. Your words are inspirational - I can't express my heartfelt thanks. Your last paragraph has given me strength. For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all is but a long twisting approach whose end I do not follow simply because there isn’t a decent view of the splendor from here... ======================== living so far from the peak of auburn’s promise, ================= until I’m through shivering from my passing on the climax of day’s end... ============================= very very cool SP. excellent employ of imagery, and presentation to define the starkness of the emotions. very vivid and impact effective... love the phrases you chose to express the emote. well done poetess chill  Did you make it to the Milky Way, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OH!!!!! This is another one by you that goes on disk for me to read again and again......how lovely. Kathleen Blake |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"with each day without you near verifying futility, I’ve prepared myself for yet another black and white tomorrow..." Such bleakness you've described... written so very well!!! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sunshine: thank you...I am glad you saw the emotion I was feeling that day... Saunni: thank you! I am glad you enjoyed! Tier: thanks! I'm happy you liked it!!  lp: thank you...I am glad to have given you some inspiration! JM: hey...thank you, m'friend, for your 'very cool' reply! you know I appreciate it...  Kathleen: why, thank you, my friend...I truly appreciate your loyal reading! suthern: thanks so much! glad you liked it! sp  to be with you... |
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