Open Poetry #13 |
Forever Love |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Forever Love Nothing is of greater worth Than love of one who gave you birth Or took and loved you as her own A deeper love was never know Your heart is harbored in a place Of warmth and comfort, truth and grace You know that when you sleep at night She’ll still be there in morning’s light You relished in the praise you won Delighted in the world she spun She shaped your future, praised your past And gave you love a life to last A mother is the only one Who stands by all you’ve said and done No matter how much pain you bear Her heart is always waiting there She nourished you in health and soul And led your youth toward honest goals Her courage taught in many ways Has been your strength throughout your days When mother’s living days were gone The love continued on and on Your sorrow’s been consoled and eased Remembering her words and deeds Her love is pure and deep and true And still she’s watching over you She’s there for you in heaven above To bless you with forever love Elizabeth Santos |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is so very true... quote: Thank you for this... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Liz ... this is what I needed to read today from you. Simply beautiful! You've captured so many of the wonderful aspects of a Mother's love. I'm so fortunate that my mom and dad are coming over for a visit today. I have yet to write a poem for her for this year, as sometimes I am simply at a loss for words ... but I do have a few hours left before she arrives. You have inspired me ... thank you my friend. It's time for me to find a little nook and write as well. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Elizabeth - Your words inspire me each and every time I open a poem of yours - You're a truly gifted lady... God Bless... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Elizabeth: This is an exceptional writing and I hope that many, many poets read this and enjoy it as much as I have. I agree with the others - you are truly gifted. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--thank you for saying so beautifully, what is in my heart. Happy mother's day, dear friend! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Sooooooo...Beauitful on this day. To mother's everywhere...today's our day. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . always. . . you know Liz. . . you always know just what to say. . . and this is no exception. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Elizabeth, You NEVER cease to amaze me! Now that I am a mother of a four year old, I know what my mother meant when she'd say..... Someday you'll understand and boy do I ever. You've captured a mothers love quite well! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Elizabeth, very beautiful. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is as beautiful as you Liz... Regards, Sudhir |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
Elizabeth, This is simply beautiful. These were my favorite lines. You relished in the praise you won Delighted in the world she spun She shaped your future, praised your past And gave you love a life to last *appreciating my mother all the more* May His glory be fresh within me. May my heart be renewed in His hand. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a tribute and a fine verse this is. Kathleen Blake |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your lovely remarks. MOTHERS DAY INSPIRED 3 POEMS FROM ME THIS YEAR, AND I STILL MISS MY MOTHER THOUGH SHE HAS BEEN GONE 30 YEARS. SHE'S STILL WITH ME IN MANY WAYS. THANKING YOU FROM KENTUCKY LIZ |
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