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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-05-12 09:00 PM






I am naked
before you

open

heart
laid bare

here,
take it
examine it,
again

rethink parts
misunderstood


I am patient

Search quickly
or take an eternity

either way,

I am patient

should you become
discouraged

& the journey
no longer holds
appeal for you

I will not face you
with tears

no

nor cause your heart
to feel remorse

For, I am
what I have chosen
to be

& now

I choose to be
with you...


~Tier{R.T.}



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
1 posted 2001-05-12 09:07 PM


Tiersdin:  You have made one very powerful statement - I like your work and enjoyed reading this one.
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
2 posted 2001-05-12 09:24 PM


Thank you, Ariana, your comment is deeply appreciated!

*smiles*

~Tier

Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-12 09:27 PM


whoever this is for Tier, they should be thankful for every day that you choose to be with them. . .

well said and superbly done. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
4 posted 2001-05-12 11:23 PM


Stength, pride, humility: we have a winner.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-05-13 01:29 AM


I hope you are appreciated.  Powerful words.  Joyce
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS
6 posted 2001-05-13 07:47 PM


Fantastic write and show of your confidence in yourself!  Love this!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2001-05-13 07:52 PM


Remarkable strength shown...but with a tender touch...
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
8 posted 2001-05-13 09:17 PM


Thank you, Sven, Julian, Joyce, Snowpants, & Sunshine, for your kind comments, they are all deeply appreciated!

*hugs*

~Tier

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
9 posted 2001-05-14 12:21 PM


As it should be...what cant be held with love is not worth holding...and what doesnt choose to be held wont be held by love...
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
10 posted 2001-05-14 12:25 PM


I've just been reading your work, I haven't been here for awhile, but I love everything I have read from you. Great work.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
11 posted 2001-05-14 08:22 AM


Thank you, Saunni!

*smiles*

~Tier

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