Open Poetry #13 |
For You... |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I am naked before you open heart laid bare here, take it examine it, again rethink parts misunderstood I am patient Search quickly or take an eternity either way, I am patient should you become discouraged & the journey no longer holds appeal for you I will not face you with tears no nor cause your heart to feel remorse For, I am what I have chosen to be & now I choose to be with you... ~Tier{R.T.} |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Tiersdin: You have made one very powerful statement - I like your work and enjoyed reading this one. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Ariana, your comment is deeply appreciated! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
whoever this is for Tier, they should be thankful for every day that you choose to be with them. . . well said and superbly done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Stength, pride, humility: we have a winner. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hope you are appreciated. Powerful words. Joyce |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Fantastic write and show of your confidence in yourself! Love this! sp to be with you... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Remarkable strength shown...but with a tender touch... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sven, Julian, Joyce, Snowpants, & Sunshine, for your kind comments, they are all deeply appreciated! *hugs* ~Tier |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
As it should be...what cant be held with love is not worth holding...and what doesnt choose to be held wont be held by love... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I've just been reading your work, I haven't been here for awhile, but I love everything I have read from you. Great work. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Saunni! *smiles* ~Tier |
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