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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25

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Nashville

0 posted 2001-05-12 02:37 PM

windows that fall open
through the majesty of time
wishing for a small breeze
that makes it worth their lives.
windows gently lifting
the stars parade is due
hoping for external wisdom
that answers all of you.
why fall victim to the anguish
that limits your control
desperation is a term that washes
through a heartless soul.
windows that fall open
answering the call
to remember the last touch
of summers gentle fall.
windows slowly fading
from discontented truths
the ones that stay within you
and follow from your youth.
windows passing us
the chances of it all
if you close them around you
you go nowhere and fall.

© Copyright 2001 Michael G - All Rights Reserved

Tiersdin
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1 posted 2001-05-12 04:33 PM

There's many things I get from this poem and likely none of them are what you intended... Enjoyed reading very much!

~Tier

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Member Rara Avis

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2 posted 2001-05-12 05:41 PM

aVery rhythmic and lovely poem. Joyce

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-12 06:49 PM

a very revealing look at windows!

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4 posted 2001-05-12 06:53 PM

This opened the window to my heart. Enjoyed it very much.

Marina
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5 posted 2001-05-13 12:47 PM

Your insight to this one is amazing!

Only you could put it so perfectly and plain for all to see.

Marina

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6 posted 2001-05-13 07:39 PM

Yes, insightful is the word that comes to mind as well when reading this, Michael! Great write...I like this a lot!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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7 posted 2001-05-14 09:40 AM

"windows the soul to the world"

very nice...

Greeneyes~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Michael G
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Nashville

8 posted 2001-05-14 11:40 AM

Thank you all for reading and your kindness
Michael

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