Open Poetry #13 |
To dream you like that |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
When I feel you, I understand you. Your body translates itself on my lips. Like that I want you, to dream you like that. To take you, give you my heart. And in a moment let this passion run free. To glide into your soul, and conquer you all. To let you speak my tongue, in this voiceless night. And to make you, forever mine. Finally becoming, my realistic love. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Who on earth is not loving you. Love you for this poem. Titia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To let you speak my tongue, in this voiceless night. walker, your words are just so wonderful to read.. ~Wyntrer "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
I do wish you luck on this venture. "To fonally become" indeed I am sure there are many who can empathize with this. "The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful dream, hope your dream will come true. thanks for sharing this beautiful piece. Charisma |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
What a wonderful dream - or is it? Good luck on your journey. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
My best for you and yoru love. Joyce |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
pretty ] hope this isnt a dream and if it is one... hope it comes true soon! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Who could resist such a sweet plea? Wonderfully written! All writing comes |
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