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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-05-12 05:49 AM



When I feel you,
I understand you.
Your body translates itself on my lips.
Like that I want you,
to dream you like that.
To take you,
give you my heart.
And in a moment let this passion run free.
To glide into your soul,
and conquer you all.
To let you speak my tongue,
in this voiceless night.
And to make you,
forever mine.
Finally becoming,
my realistic love.


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
1 posted 2001-05-12 05:53 AM


Who on earth is not loving you.

Love you for this poem.

Titia  

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-05-12 06:38 AM


To let you speak my tongue,
in this voiceless night.

walker, your words are just so wonderful to read..

~Wyntrer

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
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Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
3 posted 2001-05-12 06:40 AM


I do wish you luck on this venture.

"To fonally become" indeed  I am sure there are many who can empathize with this.

"The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally."

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
4 posted 2001-05-12 07:36 AM


wonderful dream, hope your dream will come true. thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

Charisma

latin passion
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5 posted 2001-05-12 11:59 AM


What a wonderful dream - or is it? Good luck on your journey.
Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2001-05-12 12:19 PM


My best for you and yoru love.  Joyce
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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7 posted 2001-05-12 03:14 PM


pretty ]
hope this isnt a dream and if it is one... hope it comes true soon!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
8 posted 2001-05-12 03:18 PM


Who could resist such a sweet plea?  Wonderfully written!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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