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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-12 02:21 PM



To Dance...Forever in Your Thoughts

I trace your words, sweet passion touched.
In awe of you, I yearn of such.
When time together is standing still,
My thoughts stretch, canvassed, beyond their will.

Emerging from their storage, deep
Once anchored, now release their keep,
To live within a dream of you,
A love designed in moon of blue.

Caressed in words, of patterned heart
Criss-crossed in weave to never part.
A tapestry, in boundless light
Absorbed in darkness, of distant night.

Forever in your thoughts, to be
I dance your mind, with dreams of me.
In journey shared, my heart to explore
You dance my mind, c'est vous que j'adore.

~Wynter...
Once in a...Blue Moon


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-12-2001).]

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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
1 posted 2001-05-12 02:34 PM


I wish I was able to dance forever in his thoughts. Beautiful poem,lovely french line, eres tu a quien amo(spanish version).
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-05-12 02:55 PM


thank you walker..I was inspired by a response with the line...Forever in Your Thoughts by Alan  of West VA..

So I owe this poem to him..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-12 03:06 PM


dreaming together...love is in the air. So dreamy....

"Caressed in words, of patterned heart
Criss-crossed in weave to never part.
A tapestry, in boundless light
Absorbed in darkness, of distant night."

May the spirit keep that love burning bright. Beautifully weaved.

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

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