Open Poetry #13 |
The Moonlight and More |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The Moonlight and More I tried to paint in the heat of the day But feeling faint, came into the gray. No sunshine or rainbows to brighten, enlight Covered my pain, shaded the bright. The closeness of you, blanketed me As I rested in bed, looking out upon tree. Touching my thoughts, dreaming your climb It's arms bending near, 'til next whispers, time. Do you think that one day, this dream may come true? As tall and slender, you'll reach me, climb through The window so near, that I watch every night Wondering if or when, you'd alight. Like a bird, soaring in, landing gently to rest And I...waiting here, feeling somewhat possessed, Kissed by your memories, haunted by view I lay here watching mind replays of you. One day, will come soon, I feel it for sure. I'll see shadowed in velvet, the moonlight and more. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
"Mind Replays" -- what an excellent description of the many playbacks our mids indulge in. Wish I had had come up with that one. My compliments AT "The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"A" my mind replays and reels and rewinds so many times..keeping all the precious moments in treasured keep...*s thank you, Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I hope those precious memories brings you peace. ~~Least we but to forget those special tokens, It ours alone to replay. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I liked the way this flowed, now finish that painting! Kathleen Blake |
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