Open Poetry #13 |
One Heart |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
One heart When love coming near Flowing without words Soft touch of magic Romantic appear Mirror of love Sharing one heart Effusion tenderness Feelings coming above On heart, one soul How love enlighten My whole Charisma ~*TMP*~ 12/05/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The gracefulness of the swans are enhanced by your words.... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Your words wove together as do the swans in love. LP For those who believed in me - |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The picture of swans with words to unite the love. MAGNIFICENT |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply lovely!!! I really enjoyed this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ So delicately lovely is your presentation. I certainly enjoy seeing you here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Simply breathtaking work. The picture is prefect!! All writing comes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A wonderful presentation of beauty held in these words. Beautiful.. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Charisma...soft and delicate...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I am really glad that you enjoy both, the image and my poem. May God bless you all. Charisma |
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