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Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

0 posted 2001-05-11 10:19 AM

~Pure joy~

as I watch your eyes

~Sparkling~

as you jog up to plate

~Confident~

as you flash me that grin

~Connection~

as you swing through the hit

~Racing~

as you cross bases

~Joy~

as you slide home

~Finally~

as you believe in you

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-05-11 10:23 AM

Good play!

Oh, I mean, good poem.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-05-11 11:03 AM

I believe this is one of the poems that I have saved. Great to read it again, Kel...

*smiles*

~Tier

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-05-11 11:24 AM

That is indeed pure joy!

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-05-11 11:26 AM

A wonderful moment related in a wonderful poem. Very nice.

ForwardSearching
Junior Member

since 2001-03-23

Posts 35

5 posted 2001-05-11 11:46 AM

Very nice image it creates, Nothing like little boys and baseball games! Great write!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-11 01:11 PM

and definitely a goodie. . . what a wonderful picture from an obviously proud mother. . .

warm and sweet my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

7 posted 2001-05-12 03:26 AM

Nothing to match a parent's pride, as a child grows in a single glowing moment.

"The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally."

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-05-12 03:33 AM

Super! Could be written for my kids too.

Titia

Passions Voice
Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

9 posted 2001-05-14 07:24 PM

Someday, I hope to be able to say the same about my own children when I have any. And I hope that I'll be just as proud.

Wonderful poem.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

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