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Open Poetry #13

You and I

Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

0 posted 2001-05-11 11:10 AM

If the sun could touch
the moon
Exploding
in brilliant color
that would come
only close
to describing
my love for you

The ocean
powerful and never ending
bringing forth beautiful
treasures and
secrets
scattered across the sand
twinkling like diamonds
easily describes
the love you give to me

You are my ocean
and I, your sun
And the diamonds
of our love
never ending

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-11 11:27 AM

Tessa, this is wonderful. I have several friends who will enjoy seeing this!

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

2 posted 2001-05-11 12:25 PM

This was so poetic. I liked the comparisons. Nicely written.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-11 11:45 PM

My favorite subject...my fatal flaw. Love this poem!

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

4 posted 2001-05-11 11:58 PM

So romantic.....a token to be cherished. LP

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

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