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Upon The Dawn
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Upon The Dawn |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Lost in you I stand screaming Your voice in my head Softly calling, In you lost I lay weeping I feel silence Deep inside me My soul echoes My heart feels pain Where traces of you remain, The rain falling, my tears In shades of midnight I write to you by candlelight as you Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there I feel your warmth, your breathing still Guides me to the haven of my Dreams among the stars I love you for the passion I feel when I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your Beauty, for the colors I use to Paint our canvas of time gathered In vibrant colors Walking in summertime, Gently falling snows of winter Autumn leaves blowing Time is all I have Upon the dawn, your calming Peace renews my heart, Where again we dance in salvation Time *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Lauren.....I have not words to express the beauty of this to me on this day....thank you dear lady. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
One could not help but to close her eyes and see the colors you painted. So vivid - I loved it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lost in you I lay crying I feel the silence Deep inside me My soul echoes My heart feels the pain Where traces of you remain, The rain falling, my tears In shades of midnight I write to you by candlelight as you Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there I feel your warmth, your breathing still Guides me to the haven of my Dreams among the stars I love you for the passion I feel when I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your Beauty, for the colors I use to Paint our canvas of time gathered In vibrant colors Walking in summertime, Gently falling snows of winter Autumn leaves blowing Time is all I have Upon the dawn, your calming Peace renews my heart, Where again we dance in salvation Time stands still =========================== oh L, you already know I felt every exquisite word of this, and I know where this level of inspire comes from ... and the need to feel and then write it... God this is beautiful, I just wish we didnt have to live it to write it so intensly... and the rest...you already know *S* love ya for this one sweet poetess of the stars and now I will give these words back.. as you know how much they mean to me... but they belong here with this poem   Though my soul may sit in darkness, It will arise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly To be fearful of the night". (author unknown) ~~~~~~~  "Nature's first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold." ... "So dawn goes down to day, Nothing gold can stay." ~Frost~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-10-2001).] |
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samantha4 Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
lovely...thank you for sharing it i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was simply beautiful - oh, and Janet Marie, your comment was awesome too - lol! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then may the dawn come and with it, the promise of forever. . . beautiful Lauren. . . just beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, You describe love so beautifully, my friend. I enjoyed this much.  Michael Proust- |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you to all that responded...I am grateful and appreciate you all very much...  Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Needed to read this one tonite.... miss you sweet emerald poetess  Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Wherever you are, this is beautiful! I adore it! I am many. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love you for the passion I feel when I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your Beauty, for the colors I use to Paint our canvas of time gathered In vibrant colors Walking in summertime, Gently falling snows of winter Autumn leaves blowing Time is all I have ============================ praying for time...because theres so many who love you and need you...so many beautiful words still to write. love you my sister of butterfly memories. jm  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
a real gem this poem is PoetFriendGreeneyes... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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