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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-05-10 02:19 PM


Again They Come
Virginia Salter

there they are again
those tears
sitting one layer beneath the surface
of my heart
my mind, my soul

no reason, no rhyme,
merely morning time
on a sun-drenched day
somewhere above the clay
that makes me who I am

walking done
soaking up sun
peace and tranquility
all around
therefore, why,
why this aching inside of me
as if I’m alone here
on the globe here
orbiting the universe
that was planted so long ago,
too long ago
to be of consequence to me

what does it mean
the look of the scene
in which I’ve beheld a crimson view
a bleeding heart
with teardrop of white
the two
delicately suspended from tender green stems
umbrella’d by scalloped leaves

is there a lesson for me
“a bleeding heart contains beauty
unexplainable
unfathomable”

©May 10, 2001


© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-10 07:04 PM


very good imagery in this one, Virginia.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


AJ Keating
Junior Member
since 2001-05-10
Posts 26
New Hampshire
2 posted 2001-05-10 07:20 PM


HIIIIIII VAS!!!!!

Long time no see!  Great poem babe!

Keep it up

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"...apathy isn't it...we can do something. Ok, so flower power didn't work, so what?  We start again."
      

Heather Miller
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
3 posted 2001-05-10 07:53 PM


very nice::
LITL,
†Heather†

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

samantha4
Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2001-05-10 08:56 PM


beautiful......i could very much relate...
my favorite line....
"is there a lesson for me
“a bleeding heart contains beauty
unexplainable
unfathomable”"

i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings

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