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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-05-09 04:37 PM

Living with myself is getting unbearable
Words of wisdom I had ignored
While youth flowed through me
Like a raging river detoured
So much simpler then;
The days were all brand new
So many chances, so many turns
From what I thought I’d pursue
Scary how fast it all went
This is no way to live
Can’t keep offering myself anymore
For I have nothing left to give

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-09 04:42 PM

I think you have more than you could ever know.....you are amazing.....

SEA

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-05-09 05:11 PM

You're only dead when you're dead.
Till then give me a chance to enjoy your poetry. You can't let me down now PK, 'cause I still have a lot to learn from you.
Bad moment?

Titia

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2001-05-09 05:30 PM

Not true... for your words touch others who're disappointed with their decisions and feeling empty... Well done!

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-05-09 05:44 PM

SEA - Thank you, but you are amazing. You are the wo-man! LOL

Titia - Take all the chances you need...thanks. Bad moment yes, but then it goes. Then it comes back. Then it goes. LOL

Suthern - Glad you feel that way, that is so nice, thank you.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-05-09 05:54 PM

Yes, where did all those simpler times go?

"Words of wisdom I had ignored
While youth flowed through me"
If only I would of heeded some of the advice I was given in my youth.
At least you have your poetry to share with us. Thank you!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-09 05:56 PM

there's always more PK. . . I've learned that. . .

a good look at the things that we might have done. . . and the things that we are doing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

samantha4
Junior Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 32
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2001-05-10 09:03 PM

"when youth flowed through me"...
beautiful poem, very touching. and a lesson to everyone to not let our lives pass us by. thank you.

i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings

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