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RMW
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0 posted 2001-05-10 01:54 PM


The Altar Candle

Votive
burning
hallowed
grace.

Motive
yearning
for more
wax.

RMW    (a little brevity for Sven...who...as we all know..is an exceptionally kind man)

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1 posted 2001-05-10 01:58 PM


This is SO cool...and so damned smart I could almost swear you are a witch!   Brevity--maybe, but enough said, and perfectly too!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-05-10 01:58 PM


flame
flickering
grace
through
shadowed
lace...

You are amazing!

SEA
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3 posted 2001-05-10 02:00 PM


yes, I like this too... makes me wish very much that I wrote it    SEA
Martie
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4 posted 2001-05-10 02:42 PM


Bob--Sound of "just right" in this.
Corinne
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5 posted 2001-05-10 03:44 PM


Another wonder, laden with meaning!

Cor

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6 posted 2001-05-10 06:50 PM


as a Catholic, it had a very real meaning....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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