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walker
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since 2001-02-11

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Florida

0 posted 2001-05-09 08:53 PM

This love found no heart to rest.
It just became a mess.
It struggled, but could not survive.
Now there is no place in heaven,
for this impetuous love.
So when you are out there walking,
just look up to the sky.
My love will be right there,
disguised in a cloud.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved

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Member Rara Avis

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1 posted 2001-05-09 08:56 PM

I like your poem, but you better grab that love back. Joyce

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Member Seraphic

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2 posted 2001-05-09 08:58 PM

beautifully done

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11

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3 posted 2001-05-10 05:47 PM

Loved this poem , Your love shall surely draw your subjects memory.

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4 posted 2001-05-10 06:52 PM

isn't it amazing what we really do see in clouds, this made me think of a heart in a cloud....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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