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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-05-10 10:15 AM


The Flight

Pine boughs oh so gently sighing
send your dreams high up, flying ~
up, up, where the Eagle in flight ~
looks down from his skyward height.

See all things just as they are,
find your wish among My stars,
don’t forget I hear prayers too
Paradise is yours to view.

Now let the heart follow mind
on this flight, your soul unwinds,
drift along the unseen current
away from life’s daily torment.

At my hand your time is written,
and My love I’ve not kept hidden ~
so fear not the pine boughs sighing
or when Eagle’s wings take to flying.

Now return to daily tasks
and work with Me, is all I ask,
for I may make your burdens light,
so your soul shall always take flight.

11 November, 1999
©KRJ

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-05-10 12:25 PM


Such a wonderful, wonderful poem...

Thanks Karilea, for reposting this one...
regards,
sudhir

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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2 posted 2001-05-10 12:38 PM


Your verse gives my soul wings to fly from the hum drum, I liked much, its hard to type perched on a telephone pole.

Regards,
Olias

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3 posted 2001-05-10 02:15 PM


This is so pretty, Sunshine, enjoyed very much!

~Tier

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4 posted 2001-05-10 02:28 PM


Amen.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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