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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Forgive me for stumbling over the roadblocks in your heart... shadows drenched in noir worked their trickery- decieved me into believing you cared I linger, winded from the fall dazed from the truth & still hopelessly lost perhaps one day, I'll find my way home... ~Tier{R.T.} 5/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tier, I'm glad that you finished the poem with a hopeful stance... you will surely find your way, everybody does, just keep looking and searching... regards, Sudhir |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice writting, Sad subject  I hope you find your way, keep your head up high and you will  Julie |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sudhir & Whisky, I appreciate your comments and sentiments! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Those kinds of roadblocks are so easy to stumble over. THis poem reminded me of how hard the fall Well done Liz |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Liz *smiles ~Tier |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tier--Well written and emotive poem...just remember...you carry home around with you...in your heart. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Martie, I'll remember that! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: the darkest kind of dark Tier. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sven *smiles* ~Tier |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I linger, winded from the fall dazed from the truth Each word of this is perfect...impressive! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very well written, tugs at the heart strings, yet leaves a sense of hope. It was a pleasure to read. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
JLR: *BIG SMILES* Thank you so much for reading, Gemini, I'm glad that you liked! :-) ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
so many good lines ... they wont leave me .. thank you |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love this one. It speaks..loudly..yet whispers.. |
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samantha4 Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
Ah, Tiersdin... I can definitely relate to your words - and you put them together so beautifully. Very enjoyable... i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Temptress & Samantha, I'm glad that you both liked! *smiles ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Ouch........love can be painful, can't it, my friend? I applaud. I've so enjoyed reading you lately.
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
We've all floated/ drowned on the waves of love, Kel, no real secret there! It's just that heartache is what I write best... *smiles* ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been trying very hard to read deeply into various lines of poetry to pick "one" that stands out alone... this whole darn thing won't let me do that! You have a unique style....so all I can say is, IWIHWT..... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckling* ~Tier |
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Davey Hays New Member
since 2001-05-10
Posts 4California, United States |
Lord all mighty, deep stuff. Very well crafted, good content and proper nomenclature and lexicon. Very impressed. Keep up the good work. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Davey, and W*E*L*C*O*M*E to passions! *smiles* ~Tier |
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