Open Poetry #13 |
He Is More..... |
SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I created him from pure want………………… a need wished real from my soul Crossing lifetimes…………………to fulfill this ache to make me whole My muse…………my music…………my reason for rhyme deja`vu of a lover…………… from another time A connection felt ……………………………..beyond earth and sky A powerful strength……………………one can’t deny A knowledge of knowing………………..remembering once more Key found…………………….to open heart’s door So much more…………than mere fantasy My soulmate………………the other half of me ~SEA~ If I let you into my heart..... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hope you have found him for real. This is very nice. Joyce |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's wonderful to feel that connection with someone, and to actually get to share your life with them is a blessing. You've got a lovely spirit and a beautiful heart, SEA!!! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joyce~ yes, I have thank you Serenity~ you are so sweet....hugs to you thank you it is pretty wonderful ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Each new day ... is blessed with butterflies ... when you can see your own reflection ... in his eyes. this is lovely and sweet Sea-girlie .. "he" inspires beautiful poetry in you Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ thank you....I haven't shown it to him yet....he's not big on poetry...lol I get that "ummm,that's nice" but that's ok...that's why I bring it here to share thanks SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...you kep stretching...and it looks good... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ thank you for always saying such nice things to me You are so wonderful!! Thank you SEA |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
SEA, He is there. Keep looking and believe. Michael Proust- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Girl ... this is LOVELY ! I just adore your little muse ! And you can give that muse a BIG HUG from me ! > Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . I'm jealous. . . wonderuful SEA. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
beautiful. You have the special touch that reaches out to all. M. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol im bumpin but o well i just now be readin all of urs!!! sea u amaze me! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sure and why shouldn't we create a hunk of a muse! Mine is Mel Gibson, by the way, and let me tell you it works! Kathleen Blake |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful and so full of depth SEA ... this is a splendid tribute to your soul mate, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Excellent work, SEA! I thought this was very original and creative, especially the pauses, they were very well placed. It also added a different flow to the piece, pausing during the pauses, what an interesting work this truly was! I just may come into Open #13 more often if I continue to see this quality of work. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
This is beautiful, SEA. I hope you show it to him soon. |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Gotta love a muse like this...lovely |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ah, the OTHER half of you. Must be the one they call Sandy Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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