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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-05-09 09:57 PM

I lay my head upon your shoulder
Within a moment I am enfolded
In the comforting arms of your love
Pure, strong and true they lift me up
When life seems to get me down

I close my eyes slowly
Concentrating on the sound
Of your beating heart
It soothes my weariness
Bidding me to draw nearer still

The feel of your touch
Washes gently over me
Like a cool summer breeze
You alone hold the power
To rejuvenate my spirit

Your fingers smooth my hair
As you whisper softly in my ear
The words are meant to ease
For they are full of love
I lie there basking in them

Your body exudes a warmth
That reaches my very core
Where it ignites a flame
Which will burn for you
From this moment forward

In the shelter of your arms
I relax knowing I am safe
From all harm here
I begin to drift off quietly
As dreams intertwine with reality

You lie there holding me
Silently keeping watch
As I slumber peacefully
In the calm harbor
Of your everlasting love

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

1 posted 2001-05-09 10:02 PM

Lone Wolf, this is completely beautiful. You have captured the safe haven of love, just wonderfully. My compliments!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Dennis
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

2 posted 2001-05-09 10:10 PM

this really IS completely beautiful~!

[This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 05-09-2001).]

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-09 10:29 PM

This is beautiful, Lone Wolf.

Its been a while since I've read your work.
The ending..definetely wrapped up.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-09 11:01 PM

This is one of your best!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

5 posted 2001-05-10 05:07 AM

This is a classic...

Regards,
Sudhir

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2001-05-10 07:41 AM

It is good to read your work again my friend. This has an all encompassing dreamy quality. Well done, take care

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-05-10 09:59 PM

Just A Woman: Thank you for the compliments. True love is a safe haven in my opinion. We should all be blessed to find it.

Dennis: Thank you!!

Temptress: Yes, it wrapped up very nicely I thought. Thanks, been a while since I posted.

Kathleen: Aw, thank you.

Sudhir: That is a high compliment from you my friend. Thanks much.

Eagle One: Hey stranger!! Thanks for stopping by. We'll have to catch up soon. You take care too!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-05-11 05:55 AM

Lone Wolf I enjoyed reading this very much...James

White Wolf
Member

since 1999-09-18

Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland

9 posted 2001-05-11 06:16 AM

Just simply beautiful.

"The feel of your touch
Washes gently over me
Like a cool summer breeze
You alone hold the power
To rejuvenate my spirit"

This I personally know the best. The way you penned it brought a tear of joy to my eye. A better job describing it could not have been done, ever. Thanks for sharing.

The Whit Wolf

If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

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