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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-09 08:53 PM


in the gallery of life
she hangs there
a portrait of
strength and passion
filled with colors
of many hues
and lines
of many paths

you'll find her
just off the main hall
in the gallery of life
in that special room
that's been reserved
for unique masterpieces
portraits that defy description
special works that
speak to the heart and soul

and, when you come upon her
you'll know why
she is called
Untitled. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2001-05-09 08:57 PM


Magic, Sven.

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-05-09 08:57 PM


this is lovely.  Joyce
samantha4
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3 posted 2001-05-09 09:23 PM


Absolutely beautiful.
samantha4
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4 posted 2001-05-09 09:32 PM


Absolutely beautiful.
Just A Woman
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5 posted 2001-05-09 10:01 PM


Applauds!!!!!!  You've captured her.  Tiersdin's words breathe and dance all on their own.  She's magic!  


"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2001-05-09 10:44 PM


How on earth did I miss this? Oh, wow!
Thank you, Sven, so much! I will treasure it always.

*MAJOR HUGS & KISSES*

~Tier

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7 posted 2001-05-10 02:48 AM


beautiful..lovely and well written..great job and thanks for sharing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

JLR
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8 posted 2001-05-10 08:52 AM


One of my new favorites here...you've written her well!
Sunshine
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9 posted 2001-05-10 11:36 AM


She is all this....and a little more....

excellence again....

Sven
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10 posted 2001-05-10 12:57 PM


Temptress, thank you. . .

Joyce, thank you for reading. . .

samantha, thank you so much. . .

Just a Woman, that's a good word for her. . . magic. . .thank you. . .  

Albert, thank you for reading my friend. . .  

JLR, she's one of my new favorites too. . . thank you. . .

Sunshine, thank you my friend. . .

Tiersdin, well my friend, I'm glad that you didn't miss this one. . . your words have spoken with a gentle quiet quality all their own. . . thank you for sharing them with us. . .  

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