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blueju
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since 2001-05-09
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New Zealand

0 posted 2001-05-09 05:00 AM



Each day a little girl cries,
alone in her emotions
where she finds herself lost

Every week this girl weeps
entranced with sadness
enticed by danger

Hey, this is a little inpromtu poem I made up...it's weak isn't it? I'm just experimenting with this. Well...thanks for reading! Ciao  

© Copyright 2001 blueju - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-05-09 07:31 AM


BlueJu~
Welcome to Passions !

You won't be 'lost' here ...
The circle of friends ... takes you in !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

2dalimit
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2 posted 2001-05-09 07:37 AM


Welcome!
You write 'em. You share 'em. We'll read 'em.
Melton

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3 posted 2001-05-09 07:44 AM


Welcome blueju...but you won't be blue here, or alone for that matter.  You have just made yourself a ton of new friends!  Nice start by your impromptu muse!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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whiskey
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4 posted 2001-05-09 08:13 AM


Very nice first post, Welcome to passions   will look forward to reading more of your work  


Julie

helen smith
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5 posted 2001-05-09 10:23 AM


hellloooooooo  lovely to see you .....words are nice aren't they ? see ya later
Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-05-09 10:27 AM


Welcome to Passions!  Any effort is a good effort...so keep posting!
Sven
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7 posted 2001-05-09 06:28 PM


hey. . . that's why we're here. . . come on in. . . sit a while. . .  

welcome. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
8 posted 2001-05-09 06:40 PM


No words are weak when written from the heart. You did a very good job, and its
nice to have you join this bunch.

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-05-09 08:26 PM


welcome to Passions.!
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10 posted 2001-05-09 08:55 PM


I'll be looking for more from you.  Have confidence in your own words.  Joyce
Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2001-05-09 08:59 PM


Come on in, on this site you won't feel blue, 'cause only nice people live here with funny names.

I know, 'cause they were nice to me too, when I joined them recently.

Welcome to PIP

Titia


blueju
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since 2001-05-09
Posts 2
New Zealand
12 posted 2001-05-10 12:57 PM


Thanks for your encouraging words everybody, it's nice to know that there are decent people out in the world who don't insult anybody who trys a little.
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