A BREATH AWAY... (repost from pub)

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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-05-08 06:05 PM

i fell to sleep
in your arms

far away from
the truth--
yet a breath away
from lonliness;

in my mind
you pulled me close
and held me there

you warmed me
with your presence

you inspired me
with your very existance...

i fell asleep
in peaceful ignorance

...of the lonely truth

--dgvarner

"...if i ran away,
i'd never have the strength
to go very far..."

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2001-05-08 06:14 PM

oh this makes me want to cry...this touches the heart so gently....

hugs to you

SEA

snowpants
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2 posted 2001-05-08 07:27 PM

This is a heartbreaking, but wonderfully expressed write, dg...quite an emotional poem...I like it a lot!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Songbird
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3 posted 2001-05-08 07:33 PM

You have wrote a picture of sadness so very well.

Parker
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4 posted 2001-05-08 10:55 PM

dg, this is an incredible write. Though sad it speaks volumes of the lonely heart and the dreamer in all of us.

I'll dream in innocense tonight and forget the loneliness...

Maybe i'll dream of you.

Parker

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-05-09 02:26 AM

DG~
Hello, gal. Good to see your smile !
Nicely done !
Dream on !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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6 posted 2001-05-09 02:29 AM

How did I miss this on the Pub? Very nice. Joyce

Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-05-09 02:08 PM

"yet a breath away
from lonliness;"
Such simple sweetness in this poem. Really loved this.

"I am not now that which I have been."

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2001-05-09 02:24 PM

you guys are beautiful..

i've been away so long..didnt expect even this many responses..

SEA..dont cry...

but i thank you much for reading

SNOWPANTS..thanks a bunch!

SONGBIRD..thank you for reading

PARKER..only maybe....?

MARGIE..thanks for stopping in to see my smile..i'll keep dreaming..thats what we dreamers do best, afterall...

hey..when are we gonna get together in sunny florida??

JOYCE..uh...its an oldie...lol just pulled it out of the blue yonder..! thanks for reading..

JULIAN..i thank you friend poet..

hugs! g

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-09-2001).]

Parker
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9 posted 2001-05-09 03:32 PM

Well, If I had control.... its like somebody else controls the little channle changer and I never know what i'm going to get.

but if I had control I would.

Parker

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-05-09 04:39 PM

heartfelt words you've penned here.
words straith from your heart.
Excellent write as always.

((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-05-09 04:49 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-05-09 04:54 PM

Love it too

Titia

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

13 posted 2001-05-10 09:20 AM

I have missed reading your work my friend, so glad to have found this one.

From begining to end, I loved it, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2001-05-10 12:33 PM

PARKER..yeah..i know how ya are...no control..no control whatsoever...!!

CHARISMA..thanks a bunch!

JAMESMICHAEL..thank you for reading

TITIA..glad you stopped in

EAGLEONE..i have missed you reading my work..LOL

thank you, EAGLE..and good to have you stop in!

hugs, g

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