Open Poetry #13 |
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A BREATH AWAY... (repost from pub) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
i fell to sleep in your arms far away from the truth-- yet a breath away from lonliness; in my mind you pulled me close and held me there you warmed me with your presence you inspired me with your very existance... i fell asleep in peaceful ignorance ...of the lonely truth --dgvarner "...if i ran away, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh this makes me want to cry...this touches the heart so gently.... ![]() ![]() |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is a heartbreaking, but wonderfully expressed write, dg...quite an emotional poem...I like it a lot! sp ![]() to be with you... |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You have wrote a picture of sadness so very well. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, this is an incredible write. Though sad it speaks volumes of the lonely heart and the dreamer in all of us. I'll dream in innocense tonight and forget the loneliness... ![]() Maybe i'll dream of you. ![]() Parker |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Hello, gal. Good to see your smile ! Nicely done ! Dream on ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How did I miss this on the Pub? Very nice. Joyce |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
"yet a breath away from lonliness;" Such simple sweetness in this poem. Really loved this. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you guys are beautiful.. ![]() ![]() SEA..dont cry... ![]() ![]() SNOWPANTS..thanks a bunch! ![]() SONGBIRD..thank you for reading ![]() PARKER..only maybe....? ![]() MARGIE..thanks for stopping in to see my smile..i'll keep dreaming..thats what we dreamers do best, afterall... ![]() JOYCE..uh...its an oldie...lol just pulled it out of the blue yonder..! thanks for reading.. ![]() JULIAN..i thank you friend poet.. ![]() hugs! g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, If I had control.... its like somebody else controls the little channle changer and I never know what i'm going to get. ![]() but if I had control I would. ![]() Parker |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartfelt words you've penned here. words straith from your heart. Excellent write as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Love it too Titia |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I have missed reading your work my friend, so glad to have found this one. ![]() "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..yeah..i know how ya are...no control..no control whatsoever...!! ![]() CHARISMA..thanks a bunch! ![]() JAMESMICHAEL..thank you for reading ![]() TITIA..glad you stopped in ![]() EAGLEONE..i have missed you reading my work..LOL ![]() ![]() hugs, g |
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