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The Same Wind Blows
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The Same Wind Blows |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Same Wind Blows Who wants to lose their freedom? I will be the first to say "not I." You seem to believe I would take your freedom away. I can only wonder why. The same wind blows across our bodies gently caressing us in mysterious ways. It comes and goes as it pleases and always has it's way. And yet isn't it reassuring to know that the gentle wind is always close and never too far away? Each time you come my way I love the feel of your gentle caress. I love to bathe in your beauty and soak in the luxury of your loveliness. Still I know you will stay only for awhile and then you will go and I have no problem with that. Yet when you stand close at hand I will enjoy you all I can. And when you're gone patiently wait until your gentle caress of which I'm blessed comes to me once again. I don't want to take your freedom yet sometimes I want to hold your hand. I love you just the way you are. I hope you understand. Jameslee@May08,2001 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~  this is wonderful SEA |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is most beautiful...and beautifully written.. , g"...if i ran away, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that you are understood James. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love you just the way you are. I hope you understand."" indeed a lovely phrase, I hope whoever this is for does understand... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ Very lovely thoughts. LOVE that title !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It's a good poem James, but in my opinion the freedom spoken of her is over rated. Joyce |
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