Open Poetry #13 |
Do Words Have Power? |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Do Words Have Power? by Michael If words have power, then why do mine so fail? I often find them weak, frail, limping along when I'd prefer that they would run like hell. Perhaps it’s because I hold my pen too tightly, not letting it loose to fly across the page and scrawl in bold letters, thoughts that might be too controversial. No, that’s not true. My pen has its liberty, but common sense must prevail. I write for the good of man, not the opposite. I write to soothe the heart, lift up the hurting, embrace those in need of reassurance. I write to offer hope. I write to let others know that we’re much the same in what we think and feel. Though weak in many ways, my words still have their place. Proust- |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think your words are beautiful, strong and smart |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
michael.......your words possess great powers....helen |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes written words have more power than spoken ones. Great poem! |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
Michael, I wish I had your way with words! Elizabeth Anne |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
How did you know what I was thinking? Love it very much Titia |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey Michael...yes, your words definitely touch all of us here in a wonderful way! Excellently written poem! Love the style... sp to be with you... |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Michael..I agree...your words are embracing..intriguing...and so very beautiful. ~*~smiles~*~ dawn |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--You words tell of hope and dispair...they sing and they cry...they offer friendship and wisdom...and I'm so glad you post them here. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Your words I seek out and find them wonderfully expressive. Let your pen fly. Sometimes what we believe will be controversial is actually just meat for friendly discussion. Pen on.!! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
absolutely..... this is wonderful! Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
SEA, You are very sweet and I thank you both for reading and for the compliment. Helen, If that is true, then for some reason I can't see it. Still, I do appreciate such a nice comment. walker, That is certainly true. Sometimes they do tend to carry more weight. I wonder why that is. Thank you. I'm glad you liked this piece. Elzabeth Anne, If you want to learn to write, then I'll help you in anyway that I can. Thanks for reading, my friend. Titia, Welcome to Passions. This is the first that I've seen of you. There's a great group of people here. Oh, and thanks for the nice comments. snowpants, That my words touch a person is what every writer wants to hear, for that is one of the main reasons we continue to write. Thank you for letting me know this and thanks for coming by to read. Dawn, Such a lovely things to say. Be careful now or you'll be giving me a big head. Seriously, thank you so much. Martie, As you know, I'm considering leaving Passions. I don't think I've told anyone else that yet. Thank you for liking this one. Julian, "meant for friendly discussion"...that's always best, isn't it? Thank you. Lauren, I'm so glad you liked this one. Thank you, my friend. Thank you, everyone! Michael Proust- |
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