Open Poetry #13 |
...forgot what to say |
insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
The years are passing like the hands on a clock Yesterday I ran but today I just walk My memory is fading from day to day I wanted to tell you something but I... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.....this is so cool!!!!!!!!! Probably the best I've read in a long time with a great twist at the end!!!! got me buzzed!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Bravo! What a wonderful verse Insect! Oh I enjoyed this clever wording ... you've left me filling in the blanks in a most excellent way ... much enjoyed this, thank you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
allow me to remind you..... this is great.... SEA ( Lois ) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ROFL |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I want you to know that..... Sorry, I forgot, but I'll tell you something else. Jee...forgot it again. Very nice poem bye the way [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow! love this! speaks loudly in so few words... have often felt this way in my wandering mind..sometimes it was there, on the top of my head...but it teetered off just as i opened my mouth...funny how that happens... hugs, g "...if i ran away, i'd never have the strength to go very far..." [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ok so,...I've read this a thousand times now! And it's stuck in my head. You're top stuff I! Enjoyed. Again. And again. *Peace poet. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yep...definitely got the curiosity goin' with this one... ...but, great write, insect! sp to be with you... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
well, they say the good thing about Alzheimer's is you get to meet a lot of new people Look what you have to look forward to! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sunnyone Kit McCallum SEA breeze Irish Rose Titia Geertman dgvarner SpitFire snowpants Balladeer THANK YOU [This message has been edited by insect (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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