Open Poetry #13 |
finger's edge |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
do not weep for words my friend I cry I sigh I pretend my surprise you my friend mine-- I lick my finger's edge... Tides in roar sea in beg cling my toes upon the ledge and below my everything the twinkling possibilities... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I pretend my surprise ... ... Tides in roar sea in beg cling my toes ... Wonderful... nailed the feelings exquisitely ... Regards O Serene One, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I enjoy it when your feelings pour ~ 'cling my toes upon the ledge and below my everything the twinkling possibilities...' Ah ... 'the twinkling possibilities...' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
really enjoyed this written well..i like hugs, g "...if i ran away, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I look over the edge. . . and see you next to me. . . because we both know that life is best seen from the ledge. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey K,...can I tell you something extremely strange that I do with these little writes of yours? heh. In e. In e I will. - They dance themselves inside my head and repeat, repeat, repeat. Always enjoying. Take care you. *Peace. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
magnificent, i totally was brought to a silver blue feeling on the ledge Kindly, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
cling my toes upon the ledge and below my everything the twinkling possibilities... ahh yes the twinkling possibilities! It'a always a pleasure to read you hon Maree |
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