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Open Poetry #13

Creed of nobilty

Crucifix
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 4

0 posted 2001-05-07 02:05 AM

What my eyes do not see.
My heart feels.
And my soul listens.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-05-07 02:16 AM

Hmm... interesting portrayal of the senses. I thought it was quite creative how you worded this, and the content of it was an interesting little concept - that sight is in many ways the weakest sense.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-05-07 11:57 AM

What eyes do not see
heart does feel and feel the more
and soul does listen

Excellent thoughts here.

Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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