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Night_Myst
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since 2000-08-16
Posts 34
River Falls, WI

0 posted 2001-05-06 10:47 PM


People
There are too many people
Too many people that I know
Too many people that have affected me
Too many that changed my life
Too many who don’t know
Too many I can’t tell
Too many I won’t tell
Too many who will never know
It is time to start
Time to tell
Time to tell the people
It is time to tell
The life changers


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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-05-07 12:52 PM


Intriguing!

I'm assuming the people and the life changers are not the same beings.  This piece makes me want to know more.  Am I missing it?

wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft
2 posted 2001-05-07 01:24 AM


are you sure?
I'm confused.

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-07 09:53 AM


tell them what?  where's the rest of it ??  

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Brad Majors
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Georgia
4 posted 2001-05-07 02:50 PM


Cool piece!!!
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-05-07 02:52 PM


OK.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
6 posted 2001-05-07 04:13 PM


I really liked this poem...people affect your life and how you live everyday and most
of the time you don't realize it.  People have changed my life for good and bad and a
lot of time without much consent.  tight poem. i'm puttin it in my library.

*JOE*


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