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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-07 01:33 PM


Out of mouth they sprang
Couldn’t shut them down in time
Those words that I said.
No, wouldn’t keep my mouth shut
Just let the words flow
I was speaking without thought
Oh how I love you
And I will always love you
Just don’t love myself as much

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Rosebud1229
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1 posted 2001-05-07 02:21 PM


Interloper, who hasn't did this we all say things we shouldn't in the heat of  a moment, but sometimes I'm sorry , is all you can say. I guess that's what makes us human. Very nice poem.
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2 posted 2001-05-07 02:24 PM


this is so heartfelt....very touching....   SEA
inot2B
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3 posted 2001-05-07 02:26 PM


I forgive you and I don't even know you. So I'm sure that the person you offended will forgive you also. Just don't let it happen again.
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4 posted 2001-05-07 02:27 PM


Rosebud ~ Thanks.  Nice to know I'm human  

SEA ~ So THERE you are.  Where you been hiding, gal?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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5 posted 2001-05-07 02:28 PM


inot2B ~ Yessir, er, ah, or ma'am  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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6 posted 2001-05-07 02:36 PM


Interloper~   Hi, I've been working in my garden.....soon I will have fresh yummies  
Gemini
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7 posted 2001-05-07 02:58 PM


I feel your words and know I've been there.  Excellent write.
Mabel A. Dilley
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8 posted 2001-05-07 03:00 PM


Wonderful is the human who admits their mistakes and makes efforts to correct.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-05-07 04:17 PM


everyone forgives you!  keep writing!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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10 posted 2001-05-07 04:23 PM


SEA ~ I need some carrots.  Write about them for me  

Gemini ~ Thank you for your kind comment.

Julian ~ Just call me Homosapien  

Colleen ~ With friends like you, how could I not continue my work?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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