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Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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0 posted 2001-05-04 01:33 AM



The water glistened
Cheery blue
A year ago today

The water was dark
Tumultous
Today

The water was muddy
Surrounded with flowers
Three years ago today

Wish you were here
Wish I could be the one
To see you today

Instead of looking
At crushed flowers
The cold ground
And a lonely grave

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

© Copyright 2001 Cuddlez - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-04 01:43 AM


sad poem, I wish you better sunny days.LP

He is my pen, I am but the paper he
writes on.
~~3LW~~SM

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-05-04 02:18 AM


this is so very sad and a feeling I know well.  Joyce
Cuddlez
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3 posted 2001-05-07 03:58 PM


thanks!
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