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As Rose Petals Fall I ask
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As Rose Petals Fall I ask |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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As Rose Petals Fall I Ask As Luna abates the winter solstice emanates with gentle radiance casting crystalline brilliance to nights inclement residue. Rose petals fall in tepid breeze as winters calling holds back for one last dance, daffodils and posies worthy of bouquets sway to and fro. Harmony and peace abide this picturesque moment as if knowing time was coming to an end and true seasonal change would rule the land. One could find them selves rapt in awe, poised in wonderment, celebrating such a momentous theme inspirational in magnitude. What captivating influence these earthy gifts have when given the opportunity to penetrate deeply with powers only nature can provide, promoting tranquillity’s healing powers to a weary soul. We as humans fail to remember the power of nature when capsized in our own limited self. I merely rapt in “awe” poised in “wonderment” watching rose petals fall, ask myself why do I let the love for life pass by when at this moment “seeing” such beauty so freely given and am asked “nothing” in return except to be merely thankful! By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed, nicely written and expressed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ This is just soooooooooooo lovely~ You've come so far in your writing ~ I think this is one of your best to date ~ *Hugs*, sweet poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cerenity--Why indeed?...and what a beautiful poem! |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Thank you Cerenity for reminding us to be more thankful in such a poetic way. monique |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Outstanding! *applauds* thank you, Cerenity ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just beautiful Cerenity. . . this is one of the best that you've written. . . I agree, you have come far in your time here. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
To All of You, I have been really down of late when it comes to my writing, not feeling it is very good, I have fought so hard with spelling and grammar this past year and I do know I have come along ways, I just for some reason seem at odds with it and on top of it my muse has up and went on vacation I think it likes it were ever that is cause it's taking it's sweet time! So when I say that all of your replys mean so very much I truly do mean it, I know from this reply that when I say I have just been at a loss for words you would not think so but that really is how it's been and I hope to be back to my old self here real soon and do some real replying to your work until then once again thank you so very much for your loving replys. Love, Cerenity |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree with the others....this is one of the best pieces I've seen you written...I loved the flow, rhythm, and vocabulary.....a very good write!! Nathan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank you for this inspiring piece on nature and the beauty of it. Kathleen Blake |
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