Open Poetry #13 |
Down Along The Cove |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Down Along the Cove I met you down along the cove and that's where I first kissed you in that lovely cove. I was just lying on my back, eyes closed, enjoying the sound of the trade winds blowing thru the palm trees. Totally relaxed, yet emotionally spent. That's when you came to me. When I first heard your voice I thought you were just a dream. As I slowly opened my eyes I expected to see only palm fronds blowing in the breeze. Yet it was you. And such a lovely treat for my eyes to behold. Let me say you were a sight for sore eyes. And as I would discover a blessing to this lonely heart. It was funny how the first words from your mouth were so comforting to me. You said "Do you need some company?" And you stood there for a moment gazing down at me while I gathered my thoughts. Somehow in my eyes you could read the message from my heart. In the cove we talked and we kissed. Then you said I'm going for a swim. Wanna come with? You know there's nothing quite as relaxing as a swim in a cove when you jump into that warm water with a lovely lady sans all her clothes. And I thought the kissing was fun when in fact the fun had just begun in the cove. Jameslee@May04,2001 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've painted such a wonderfully visual encounter James, and set the mood of this scene perfectly. Very nicely written, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words were so relaxing this morning, James ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ *Sighhhhhhhhh* Lovely imagery ~ Lovely thoughts ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great images, makes one want to be there. Romantically beautiful! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have been there...and its a beautiful place to love...hugs sweetie |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwww, sigh....I'd love to be along the cove....this is beautiful.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kit, wynter, Marge, walker, Paula and Lauren for the nice responses...James |
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