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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Dreaming Of you touching Places within my heart Reaching deeply into my soul I can feel you here beside me, even as the night brings us such sweet sleep While you are peacefully In your own world Dreaming ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"sweet dream are made of these" ... you have mastered these lil gems girlie  I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You little cutie pie poet .... I love this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Lovely work, in a capsule of passion. Coal |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ I think you have mastered this form of expression. WELL DONE! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ahhh!!! Dreaming... Need those. Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
wow......."gulp" |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
WHOO HOO! YOU GO GIRL! that was great.. man.. I wish I could write like that.. Maybe you could give me some pointers *wink* keep up the good work |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Sea Intertwined through "dreams from the heart" I felt your poem was unabridged . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful form and sentiments SEA, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I love the peace of this! Almost like a lullaby. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Very nice SEA *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Waking To the soft feel Of moist breath on my neck And a warm hand upon my chest Brings a smile to a tired and sleepy face And joy to a brand new morning That will be better still When you too are Waking |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Uss nay Tupti hoe pishani par jub hath rukha (When he put his hand on my hot forehead) Rooh tuk a gae taseer maseehae ki (Its impression of the miraculous powers of Christ come up to the soul) I love to nice poetry. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ thank you Janet~  thank you Marge~you're the cutie pie thank you Coal~thanks Interloper~ thank you sweetie Bernie~definately..... thanks PK~ thank you for the wow......very much 5 SK~ thank you Craig~thank you Sven~ Kit~thank you!! JLR~ thank you for that....very nice Maureen~ thanks! Jamie~ are you awesome! Thank you for that.... Waseem C~ thanks ~SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sounds like a stunning dream to me! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever dream away with your love and wake up to see your dream lay there before your very eyes happily with you! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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