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A Skewed View
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A Skewed View |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A Skewed View Virginia Salter In the window glass across the street I find a skewed view... people pass before they’re here as witnessed from this portal of the present An illusion of life to be, could it be the same for me? Might there be someone, somewhere seeing me before I’m there? Someone whose sight traverses from future, past knowing just how long this life of mine will last? Someone who knows my minutes, hours as well as sun lifts up the flowers. It must be so it must be true a kindred spirit that brought me you Your tender words your loving ways Empower my nights indwell my days Raise up my chin dry up my tears soothe my soul quell my fears. Clouds that would engulf, entomb Burned away... now watch me bloom! © May 2, 2000 |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
'some awesome thoughts here, quite creative. 'flows quite nicely!  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Love to think about illusions like this. Interesting where you took this one. Enjoyed. Krawdad |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A whole new way of thinking. Very good. Joyce |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Excellent as always. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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