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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Is there a chance? Just one little chance? That you have me caught in a trance? Is there a way? A simplified way? To win at this game that we play? Is there an out? A clear cut way out? So I needn’t stumble about? Is there a chance? Just one little chance? That I have you caught in my trance? Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~sigh~ my feelings exactly...we are thinking alike today...your words were perfect! Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
hey!!! I'm telling Elvis. ( he lives in my guest room yanno) Very nice S1-- take care-- Jamie (ex-promethean person) There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Maureen ~~~ Oh.....it must be something in the air today, I guess....~ sigh ~....maybe Spring fever!? Thank you, it was good to see you here today and to share the thoughts!! ~~~ Jamie ~~~ So good to see you again......and thank you for taking good care of Elvis!!!  Glad you enjoyed this little piece!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
You tackled such an age old question and left to dream. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
words of perfection, beautiful Sunnyone~... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I certainly hope so, my friend! We all need that chance and we all need to be ensnared by someone...neat write... jwesley |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny It would be fun to snare someone in a trance. Loved this one - it is a keeper. |
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