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In my dream I beheld thirteen doves
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In my dream I beheld thirteen doves |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
In my dream I beheld thirteen doves Upon the ground, one larger than the rest And off to the side sat a lonely pair Both looking as if for their own nest It was a calm clear forgettable day A day like many before seen The doves went about their lives In a random group these thirteen And it would have been uneventful Had it not been for that strange lonesome pair Who walked ever so slowly into the group And at once, they all took to the air Moving with such grace straight toward Heaven What started out as an inconspicuous thirteen Now became the most beautiful sight in the sky As they flew together these, now fifteen |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
WOW, and where they the gatherers? Did they escort all the rest to heaven? Boy, have you started some heavy thinking! I love this. ME |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Yes, ME...you're on the right track with your guesses. Definitely. Thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb PK. . . I love the symbolism and the imagery here. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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