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ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

0 posted 2001-05-04 12:47 PM

How can this be true,
Now at a time like this,
With everything I do,
I create a distance.

Between the love that we created,
And the love that we have now.
I have once anticipated,
That it would return somehow.

That gentle calm inside,
That graces such a presence,
That was once left behind,
Just to feel your essence.

Who am I to justify,
This sincerity I feel.
Who am I to criticize,
What has just happened here.

What is it that draws me close,
And takes my breathe away,
You hold me as if to know,
That I will always stay.

Somehow just this moment,
It all makes perfect sense,
I love you and you feel it,
Deep inside my kiss.

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

1 posted 2001-05-04 01:15 AM

All I can say is WOWWWW! Totally awesome poem...
You have the feelings of passion and drama along with love, summarized excelently!
Looking forward to more..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-04 02:14 AM

Amberize: If you'd be so kind to let me add to yours.
Let me return the slow buring ambers
with a long lingering kiss.
Once again fate wins...
but will not sever our tie.
Remember ALWAYS,
our torch will not fade out,
it is an everlasting burn.

I hold your love, dear
and do not take ours for granted
that you will always be there. It is the
faith we'll be there for all time for each other. LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-04 02:16 AM

very nice. Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-04 07:21 AM

SweetAmberGal~
This is just lovely !
It is so good to see again gracing our home
with your poetic renders.

Give that Sis of yours a big *HUG* for me.
And give that little one a *kiss* from me.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-05-04 07:24 AM

I have noticed the difference in a kiss as the feelings grow...a kiss seems more sincere and caring...James

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