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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-04 10:18 AM

~Friday Morning Sighs~

can you
please me
with your morning
visions
of eyes upon mine,
yours

of words
expressed
so lovingly
of touches
eyes adore

can you
hear the rhythm
of my heart
when drumming
just for you

see the want
in ~velvet eyes~
when
looking back
at blue

do you
understand the smile
you view
that occupies
this face

realize
one look
from you
can make
the drumming race

that only looks
and words
between
the two of us
can show

how needed
you are
in my life
and how I wish
it so

to be desired
just the same
to please
with ~velvet eyes~

come share
with me
your touch,
my feel
Our
~friday morning sighs~

* or any day you wish it to be..

~Wynter ...looking through ~velvet hazel eyes~

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-04-2001).]

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-05-04 10:48 AM

Wynter...."..wishing to be desired..." Another fine poem. Do you know the situation comedy, "Coach?" ....Shellie Fabrege (sp?)....the heart throb of the Donna Reed show...showing my age here. "Coach" once had a wonderful treatment on the subject of "wishing to be desired.." Thanks for the memory. Bob

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

2 posted 2001-05-04 10:51 AM

I hope you get the look that you are hoping for SOON. A lovely request. ME

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-04 11:06 AM

THis is gorgeous, I look through the world with earthy brown

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Dennis
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

4 posted 2001-05-04 11:10 AM

this is nice, I just read, can't seem to get into this poetry thing, but I like to read....

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-05-04 11:20 AM

see the want
in ~velvet eyes~
when
looking back
at blue

These are very interesting and unique lines. Good poem.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-05-04 11:39 AM

Bob..you are so funny "showing your age"...
I am no spring chicken myself...thanks for the memories....

Mother_Earth
Oh I can get that look if I want...ME
sometimes I want it coming on it's own...

Irish Rose
Thank you Kathleen...was just a silly  memory poem I wrote awhile ago... and felt like posting this morning..actually it was called ~Monday Morning Sighs~

Dennis
reading is what I  post for..so you read and I will  write  huggzzzz to you Dennis..

PoeticKnight
Yes, that want shows through all the time..shame one can't really see through these screens...
I am  happy you stopped by  Sir Knight of my Day.
  ~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

7 posted 2001-05-04 03:53 PM

You're very welcome. Even if I don't stop by to reply, hopefully as a friend, I'm always around...

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-05-04 07:15 PM

Romantically sweet, I love it!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-05-04 08:33 PM

Thanks PK again..yes you are always welcome, My Friend

Walker...I am a romantic and sweet person and writer usually.. *s thanks for noticing

huggz

Maureen/Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-05-04 08:41 PM

never will your smile a memory be, or velvet hazel eyes, as they stare into blue.

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-05-04 09:04 PM

Bill..I do love the color blue...

thank you kind sir..*s

M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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