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JLR
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0 posted 2001-05-03 07:36 PM


being in love

all day I can’t shake it
can’t even quite name it
just a sadness
I thought I’d outrun
simply missing
being in love


© Copyright 2001 JLR - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-03 07:37 PM


Yes, that is an empty feeling.  You said it all.  Joyce
jwesley
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2 posted 2001-05-03 07:41 PM


Short and sweet...good write...jwesley
walker
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3 posted 2001-05-03 08:04 PM


JLR- With so little words you said so much, but don't worry my friend soon you'll be in love. Then you'll be writing about your new love  
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
4 posted 2001-05-03 08:06 PM


"One unsuspecting day
wishes & dreams may
bring the very thing
you miss,
passionate love blessed
with a kiss..."

Sweet Poem, JLR...

*smiles*

~Tier




Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-05-03 08:31 PM


I have this silly, little girl notion that real love never ceases.  I know, that's entirely illogical, but who needs logic when you have hope in the reality of real love.  I know I have it and that's all I need to know.  I hope you do too.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


latin passion
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6 posted 2001-05-04 03:07 AM


missing you all the more...LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

PoeticKnight
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New Orleans, LA
7 posted 2001-05-04 08:51 AM


Short and...sweet. I like.
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-05-04 09:15 AM


Not only can't it be out run, It can't be out lived.

Well done!

Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
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Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
9 posted 2001-05-04 08:45 PM


Nay
   Non
     Never

Find yourself in defiance

Hold yourself with a "Fierceness"

Unimagined

Imagine..........................................////////////..................

"The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally."

redwriter1
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10 posted 2001-05-04 09:20 PM


In the famous words of the Wizard..

my dear.. we are not judged by how much "we" love....... but how much we are loved by "others".

Seems the more you open your own heart.... love just tumbles right on in.

(smile)


Being "in" love is pretty painful.  But I wish you all the best in finding the sweetest pain of all.


Paula Finn
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missouri
11 posted 2001-05-04 09:51 PM


Hey...lets just go have a beer and say the hell with all of them...this is sadly sweet darlin and I know just where that precious heart is coming from...hugs
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